Ivana Brlic-Mazuranic
(1874-1921) Is considered to be the best Croation writer for children. She was born to a prominent family and began
writing early. She married a wealthy man
and had seven children. Her work was
first published in French in 1913. This story comes from her collection “Croation
Tales from Long Ago.” This work is
considered her masterpiece for the stories are inspired by motifs taken from
Slavic mythology and folktales. Like writer Hans Christian Anderson, her work
has a Christian sense of morality.
One day a young man went
into Stribor’s Forest and did not know that the Forest was enchanted and that
all manner of magic abode there. Some of its magic was good and some was bad—to
each one according to his deserts.
Now this Forest was
to remain enchanted until it should be entered by someone who preferred his
sorrows to all the joys of this world.
The young man set to
and cut wood, and presently sat down on a stump to rest, for it was a fine
winter’s day. And out of the stump slipped a snake and began to fawn upon him.
Now this wasn’t a real snake, but a human being transformed into a snake for
its sins, and it could only be set free by one who was willing to wed it. The
snake sparkled like silver in the sun as it looked up into the young man’s
eyes.
“Dear me, what a
pretty snake! I should rather like to take it home,” said the young man in fun.
“Here’s the silly
fool who is going to help me out of my trouble,” thought the sinful soul within
the snake. So she made haste and turned herself at once out of a snake into a
most beautiful woman standing there before the young man. Her sleeves were
white and embroidered like butterflies’ wings, and her feet were tiny like a
countess’s. But because her thoughts had been evil, the tongue in her mouth
remained a serpent’s tongue.
“Here I am! Take me
home and marry me!” said the snake-woman to the youth.
Now if this youth
had only had presence of mind and remembered quickly to brandish his hatchet at
her and call out: “I certainly never thought of wedding a piece of forest
magic,” why, then the woman would at once have turned again into a snake,
wriggled back into the stump, and no harm done to anybody.
But he was one of
your good-natured, timid and shy youths; moreover, he was ashamed to say “No”
to her, when she had transformed herself all on his account. Besides, he liked
her because she was pretty, and he couldn’t know in his innocence what had
remained inside her mouth.
So, he took the woman
by the hand and led her home. Now that youth lived with his old Mother, and he
cherished his mother as though she were the image of a saint.
“This is your
daughter-in-law,” said the youth, as he entered the house with the Woman.
“The Lord be
thanked, my son,” replied his mother, and looked at the pretty girl. But the mother
was old and wise, and knew at once what was inside her daughter-in-law’s mouth.
The daughter-in-law
went out to change her dress, and the mother said to her son:
“You have chosen a
very pretty bride, my boy; only beware, lest she be a snake.”
The youth was
dumbfounded with astonishment. How could his mother know that the other had
been a snake? And his heart grew angry within him as he thought: “Surely my mother
is a witch.” And from that moment he hated his mother.
So the three began
to live together, but badly and discordantly. The daughter-in-law was
ill-tempered, spiteful, greedy and proud.
Now there was a
mountain peak there as high as the clouds, and one day the daughter-in-law bade
the old Mother go up and fetch her snow from the summit for her to wash in.
“There is no path up
there,” said the mother. “Take the goat and let her guide you. Where she can go
up, there you can tumble down,” said the daughter-in-law.
The son was there at
the time, but he only laughed at the words, simply to please his wife.
This so grieved the mother
that she set out at once for the peak to fetch the snow, because she was tired
of life. As she went her way, she thought to ask God to help her; but she
changed her mind and said: “For then God would know that my son is undutiful.”
But God gave her
help all the same, so that she safely brought the snow back to her
daughter-in-law from the cloud-capped peak.
Next day the
daughter-in-law gave her a fresh order:
“Go out on to the
frozen lake. In the middle of the lake there is a hole. Catch me a carp there
for dinner.”
“The ice will give
way under me, and I shall perish in the lake,” replied the old Mother.
“The carp will be
pleased if you go down with him,” said the daughter-in-law.
And again, the son
laughed, and the mother was so grieved that she went out at once to the lake.
The ice cracked under the old woman, and she wept so that the tears froze on
her face. But yet she would not pray to God for help; she would keep it from
God that her son was sinful.
“It is better that I
should perish,” thought the mother as she walked over the ice.
But her time had not
yet come. And therefore, a gull flew over her head, bearing a fish in its beak.
The fish wriggled out of the gull’s beak and fell right at the feet of the old
woman. The Mother picked up the fish and brought it safely to her
daughter-in-law.
On the third day the
mother sat by the fire and took up her son’s shirt to mend it. When her
daughter-in-law saw that, she flew at her, snatched the shirt out of her hands,
and screamed:
“Stop that, you
blind old fool! That is none of your business.”
And she would not
let the mother mend her son’s shirt.
Then the old woman’s
heart was altogether saddened, so that she went outside, sat in that bitter
cold on the bench before the house, and cried to God:
“Oh God, help me!”
At that moment she
saw a poor girl coming towards her. The girl’s bodice was all tom and her
shoulder blue with the cold, because the sleeve had given way. But still the
girl smiled, for she was bright and sweet-tempered. Under her arm she carried a
bundle of kindling-wood.
“Will you buy wood
for kindling, Mother?” asked the girl.
“I have no money, my
dear; but if you like I will mend your sleeve,” sadly returned the old Mother,
who was still holding the needle and thread with which she had wanted to mend
her son’s shirt.
So the old Mother
mended the girl’s sleeve, and the girl gave her a bundle of kindling-wood,
thanked her kindly, and went on happy because her shoulder was no longer cold.
That evening the
daughter-in-law said to the mother:
“We are going out to
supper with godmother. Mind you have hot water for me when I come back.”
The daughter-in-law
was greedy and always on the look-out to get invited for a meal.
So, the others went
out, and the old woman was left alone. She took out the kindling-wood which the
poor girl had given her, lit the fire on the hearth, and went into the shed for
wood.
As she was in the
shed fetching the wood, she suddenly heard something in the kitchen a-bustling
and a-rustling— “hist, hist!”
“Whoever is that?”
called the old Mother from the shed.
“Brownies!
Brownies!” came the answer from the kitchen in voices so tiny, for all the
world like sparrows chirping under the roof.
The old woman
wondered what on earth was going on there in the dark and went into the
kitchen. And when she got there the kindling-chips just flared up on the
hearth, and round the flame there were Brownies dancing in a ring—all tiny
little men no bigger than half an elf. They wore little fur coats; their caps
and shoes were red as flames; their beards were grey as ashes, and their eyes
sparkled like live coal.
More and more of
them danced out of the flames, one for each chip. And as they appeared, they
laughed and chirped, turned somersaults on the hearth, twittered with glee, and
then took hands and danced in a ring.
And how they danced!
Round the hearth, in the ashes, under the cupboard, on the table, in the jug,
on the chair! Round and round! Faster and faster! They chirped and they
chattered, chased and romped all over the place. They scattered the salt; they
spilt the barm; they upset the flour—all for sheer fun. The fire on the hearth
blazed and shone, crackled and glowed; and the old woman gazed and gazed. She
never regretted the salt nor the barm, but was glad of the jolly little folk
whom God had sent to comfort her.
It seemed to the old
woman as though she were growing young again. She laughed like a dove; she
tripped like a girl; she took hands with the Brownies and danced. But all the
time there was the load on her heart, and that was so heavy that the dance
stopped at once.
“Little brothers,”
said the mother to the Brownies, “can you not help me to get a sight of my
daughter-in-law’s tongue, so that when I can show my son what I have seen with
my own eyes, he will perhaps come to his senses?”
And the old woman
told the Brownies all that had happened. The Brownies sat round the edge of the
hearth, their little feet thrust under the grate, each wee mannikin beside his neighbor,and
listened to the old woman, all wagging their heads in wonder. And as they
wagged their heads, their red caps caught the glow of the fire, and you’d have
thought there was nothing there but the fire burning on the hearth.
When the old woman
had finished her story, one of the Brownies called out, and his name was Wee
Tintilinkie:
“I will help you! I
will go to the sunshiny land and bring you magpies’ eggs. We will put them
under the sitting hen, and when the magpies are hatched your daughter-in-law
will betray her-self. She will crave for little magpies like any ordinary
forest snake, and so put out her tongue.”
All the Brownies
twittered with joy because Wee Tintilinkie had thought of something so clever.
They were still at the height of their glee when in came the daughter-in-law
from supper with a cake for herself.
She flew to the door
in a rage to see who was chattering in the kitchen. But just as she opened the
door, the door went bang! The flame leapt, up jumped the Brownies, gave one
stamp all-round the hearth with their tiny feet, rose up above the flames, flew
up to the roof,—the boards in the roof creaked a bit, and the Brownies were
gone!
Only Wee Tintilinkie
did not run away but hid among the ashes.
When the flame leapt
so unexpectedly and the door banged to, the daughter-in-law got a start, so
that for sheer fright she plumped on the floor like a sack. The cake broke in
her hand; her hair came down, combs and all; her eyes goggled, and she called
out angrily:
“What was that, you
old wretch?”
“The wind blew up
the flame when the door opened,” said the mother, and kept her wits about her.
“And what is that
among the ashes?” said the daughter-in-law again. For from the ashes peeped the
red heel of Wee Tintilinkie’s shoe.
“That is a live
ember,” said the Mother.
However, the
daughter-in-law would not believe her, but all dishevelled as she was, she got
up and went over to see close to what was on the hearth. As she bent down with
her face over the ashes Wee Tintilinkie quickly let out with his foot, so that
his heel caught the daughter-in-law on the nose. The Woman screamed as if she
were drowning in the sea; her face was all over soot, and her tumbled hair all
smothered with ashes.
“What was that, you
miserable old woman?” hissed the daughter-in-law.
“A chestnut bursting
in the fire,” answered the mother; and Wee Tintilinkie in the ashes almost
split with laughter.
While the
daughter-in-law went out to wash, the mother showed Wee Tintilinkie where the
daughter-in-law had set the hen, so as to have little chickens for Christmas.
That very night Wee Tintilinkie fetched magpies’ eggs and put them under the
hen instead of hens’ eggs.
The daughter-in-law
bade the mother take good care of the hen and to tell her at once whenever the
chickens were hatched. Because the daughter-in-law intended to invite the whole
village to come and see that she had chickens at Christmas, when nobody else
had any.
In due time the
magpies were hatched. The Mother told her daughter-in-law that the chickens had
come out, and the daughter-in-law invited the village. Gossips and neighbors
came along, both great and small, and the old woman’s son was there too. The
Wife told her mother-in-law to fetch the nest and bring it into the passage.
The Mother brought
in the nest, lifted off the hen, and behold, there was something chirping in
the nest. The naked magpies scrambled out, and hop, hop, hopped all over the
passage.
When the Snake-Woman
so unexpectedly caught sight of copies, she betrayed herself. Her serpent’s
nature craved its prey; she darted down the passage after the little magpies
and shot out her thin quivering tongue at them as she used to do in the Forest.
Gossips and neighbors
screamed and crossed themselves, and took their children home, because they realized
that the woman was indeed a snake from the Forest.
But the mother went
up to her son full of joy. “Take her back to where you brought her from, my
son. Now you have seen with your own eyes what it is you are cherishing in your
house;” and the mother tried to embrace her son.
But the son was
utterly infatuated, so that he only hardened himself the more against the
village, and against his mother, and against the evidence of his own eyes. He
would not turn away the Snake-Woman, but cried out upon his mother:
“Where did you get
young magpies at this time of year, you old witch? Be off with you out of my
house!”
Eh, but the poor
Mother saw that there was no help for it. She wept and cried, and only begged
her son not to turn her out of the house in broad daylight for all the village
to see what manner of son she had reared.
So, the son allowed
his Mother to stay in the house until nightfall.
When evening came,
the old Mother put some bread into her bag, and a few of those kindling-chips
which the poor girl had given her, and then she went weeping and sobbing out of
her son’s house.
But as the mother
crossed the threshold, the fire went out on the hearth, and the crucifix fell
from the wall. Son and daughter-in-law were left alone in the darkened cottage.
And now the son felt that he had sinned greatly against his mother, and he
repented bitterly. But he did not dare to speak of it to his wife, because he
was afraid. So, he just said:
“Let’s follow Mother
and see her die of cold.” Up jumped the wicked daughter-in-law, over-joyed, and
fetched their fur coats, and they dressed and followed the old woman from afar.
The poor Mother went
sadly over the snow, by night, over the fields. She came to a wide stubble-
field, and there she was so overcome by the cold that she could go no farther. So,
she took the kindling-wood out of her bag, scraped the snow aside, and lit a
fire to warm herself by.
But lo! No sooner
had the chips caught fire than the Brownies came out of them, just the same as
on the household hearth!
They skipped out of
the fire and all round in the snow, and the sparks flew about them in all
directions into the night.
The poor old woman
was so glad she could almost have cried for joy because they had not forsaken
her on her way. And the Brownies crowded round her, laughed and whistled.
“Oh, dear Brownies,”
said the mother, “I don’t want to be amused just now; help me in my sore
distress!”
Then she told the
Brownies how her silly son had grown still more bitter against her since even
he and all the village had come to know that his wife truly had a serpent’s
tongue:
“He has turned me
away; help me if you can.”
For a while the
Brownies were silent, for a while their little shoes tapped the snow, and they
did not know what to advise.
At last Wee
Tintilinkie said:
“Let’s go to
Stribor, our master. He always knows what to do.”
And at once Wee
Tintilinkie shinned up a haw-thorn-tree; he whistled on his fingers, and out of
the dark and over the stubble-field there came trotting towards them a stag and
twelve squirrels! They set the old Mother on the stage, and the Brownies got on
the twelve squirrels, and off they went to Stribor’s Forest.
Away and into the
night they rode. The stag had mighty antlers with many points, and at the end
of each point there burned a little star. The stag gave light on the way, and
at his heels sped the twelve squirrels, each squirrel with eyes that shone like
two diamonds. They sped and they fled, and far behind them toiled the
daughter-in-law and her husband, quite out of breath.
So, they came to
Stribor’s Forest, and the stag carried the old woman through the forest.
Even in the dark the
daughter-in-law knew that this was Stribor’s Forest, where she had once before
been enchanted for her sins. But she was so full of spite that she could not
think of her new sins nor feel fear because of them, but triumphed all the more
to herself and said: “Surely the simple old woman will perish in this Forest
amid all the magic! ” and she ran still faster after the stag.
But the stag carried
the mother before Stribor. Now Stribor was lord of that Forest. He dwelt in the
heart of the Forest, in an oak so huge that there was room in it for seven
golden castles, and a village all fenced about with silver. In front of the
finest of the castles sat Stribor himself on a throne, arrayed in a cloak of
scarlet.
“Help this old
woman, who is being destroyed by her serpent daughter-in-law,” said the
Brownies to Stribor, after both they and the mother had bowed low before him.
And they told him the whole story. But the son and daughter-in-law crept up to
the oak, and looked and listened through a wormhole to see what would happen.
When the Brownies
had finished, Stribor said to the old woman:
“Fear nothing,
Mother! Leave your daughter-in-law. Let her continue in her wickedness until it
shall bring her again to the state from which she freed herself too soon. As
for yourself, I can easily help you. Look at yonder village, fenced about with
silver.”
The Mother looked,
and lo! It was her own native village, where she had lived when she was young,
and in the village there was holiday and merry-making. Bells were ringing,
fiddles playing, flags waving, and songs resounding.
“Cross the fence,
clap your hands, and you will at once regain your youth. You will remain in
your village to be young and blithe once more as you were fifty years ago,”
said Stribor.
At that the old
woman was glad as never before in her life. She ran to the fence; already her
hand was on the silver gate, when she suddenly bethought herself of something,
and asked Stribor:
“And what will
become of my son?”
“Don’t talk
foolishness, old woman!” replied Stribor. “How would you know about your son?
He will remain in this present time, and you will go back to your youth. You
will know nothing about any son!”
When the old woman
heard that, she considered sadly. And then she turned slowly away from the
gate, went back to Stribor, bowed low before him, and said: “I thank you, kind
lord, for all the favor you would show me. But I would rather abide in my
misery and know that I have a son than that you should give me all the riches
and happiness in the world, and I forget my son.”
As the mother said
this, the whole Forest rang again. There was an end to the magic in, because
the mother preferred her sorrows to all the joys of this world.
The entire Forest
quaked, the earth fell in, and the huge oak, with its castles and its
silver-fenced village, sank underground. Stribor and the Brownies wished, the
daughter-in-law gave a shriek, turned into a snake, wriggled away down a hole,
and Mother and Son were left alone side by side in the middle of the Forest.
The son fell on his
knees before his mother, kissed the hem of her garment and her sleeve, and then
he lifted her up in his arms and carried her back to their home, which they
happily reached by daybreak.
The son prayed God
and his mother to forgive him. God forgave him, and his mother had never been
angry with him.
Later on, the young
man married that poor but sweet girl who had brought the Brownies to their
house. They are all three living happily together to this day, and Wee
Tintilinkie loves to visit their hearth on a winter’s evening.
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Ivana Brlic-Mazuranic, Croatian Tales of Long Ago
(New York: Frederick A. Stokes Co.,1922). Illustrations by Vladimir Kirin.